Final Research Paper + Revisions and My Primary Research
The final major assignment of this semester was the final research paper assignment. The most challenging part of this assignment was making sure that I covered all my bases when using my primary research, and then using the secondary sources in order to back up my claims. This is reflected heavily in the changes from the draft to the shadow graded research paper. The primary data collection is a great example of how far my work had gotten in terms of my primary research. I was able to organize my data nicely from this rough draft to the final research paper in a way that didn't make it too difficult for the reader to comprehend. I believe that this artifact represents the third outcome the best because my final research paper was heavily influenced by my primary data and ensuring that I contribute to the scholarly conversation. I also believe that this is one of the best examples of me showing progress through the feedback of others and the learning of new information for myself.